After Class

Well, after class, I realize that there are a few things that I'm thinking about adding. I want to include at least a paragraph about the positives of technology. I noticed that my drafty draft focuses more on the negatives and I think it needs more positivity. Also, I want to include some interviews from fellow students about their opinions. I think these will help improve the piece and I'm eager to get started. That's all I've got for now.